Foundation and Empire by Isaac Asimov
1977
Panther |
| PAGE | BAD TEXT | CORRECTION |
| Blank lines between paragraphs to indicate a time gap and/or change of location are ALL missing. Many disorienting non-sequiturs between paragraphs. | |
| 24 | First line of first paragraph has been replaced by a repeat of the first line of the Encyclopedia Galactica quote preceding it. | |
| 56 | The two men, trader and patrician, entered Siwenna. | Trantor |
| 90-91 | "Magnifico," said Bayta, with a gesture, and the clown left without a sound 8 paragraphs later The captain faced the trembling Magnifico... | [continuity] |
| 151 | 1. Trantor is supposedly completely covered by metal buildings, except for the Emperor's grounds and the recently re-exposed farmlands. 2. The University has explicitly not been touched by the farmers. 3. BUT: "The thin life of Trantor trickled to nothing when they entered among the wide-spaced buildings of the University grounds." | [contradiction] |
| 154 | "Can you light a force..." | fight |
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